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04.28.2010 by David Murray // 3 Comments

I like to read boxing writing, because when it's good it's great and when it's bad its like this phrase, from Johnny Bellino's quarterly Chicago boxing mag, Boxing Shorts:

"The superbly conditioned [Tony] Zale, after being punished by Billy Boy Patterson for 12 rounds, knocked Patterson out so hard in the 13th, that the sweat flew off the loser's head and made a rainbow in the ring lights!"

Categories // Uncategorized Tags // Billy Boy Patterson, Chicago Boxing, Johnny Bellino's Boxing Shorts, Tony Zale

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  1. Jason Harper says

    April 29, 2010 at 2:33 pm

    My favorite boxing simile: toppled him “as if he’d been standing in a bucket.” I love that image.
    That’s from a fight review I came across researching bluesman and former Paul Thorn for a concert writeup. Not every flourish in the piece is as good as that one.
    Oh, and the fight did not go well for Paul.
    http://www.paulthorn.com/bio/boxing/pages/1newspaper_jpg.htm

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  2. David Murray says

    April 30, 2010 at 7:15 am

    Hi, Jason.
    Algren wrote that “his right was OK but his left wouldn’t fill his coat sleeve.”

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  3. David Murray says

    April 30, 2010 at 7:19 am

    Oh, and Jason, the best line in that is about Thorn’s lip, which “ran like a nylon.” Beautiful.

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