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When to make a short story long

07.24.2008 by David Murray // 3 Comments

Getting my land legs back, foggy this morning after my first good night’s sleep since last Friday and trying to rehydrate my chapped lips and hoping life returns sufficiently to my mind to start writing the story today.

I’ll say one thing. There is something awfully sweet about sitting on a sailboat all night, in irons, with nothing in the world to do but stare up at the limp sails, waiting for them to stir and doubting they ever will. Rarely and wonderfully, the premium in the conversations on that dark deck was on lengthening stories, adding context and depth and detail and color.

The idea was to pass the time. Meanwhile, five total strangers turned into intimates who I feel I’ve known all along.

I’m just reeling with ideas like that, but I’d better save them for the story and link to it when it’s published.

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  1. Kristen says

    July 24, 2008 at 2:24 pm

    “…sitting on a sailboat, in irons…”
    WTF? I thought you did this crazy thing VOLUNTARILY?! Why were you chained to the damn boat? What if the thing sank?
    Explain, please?

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  2. David Murray says

    July 24, 2008 at 3:32 pm

    “in irons: having turned onto the wind or lost the wind, stuck and unable to make headway.”
    I should have said, “doldrums.” But “in irons” is just way friggin’ cooler, I’m sure you’ll agree.

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  3. Kristen says

    July 24, 2008 at 6:58 pm

    Ah. Indeed – much cooler!

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